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Wednesday, November 30, 2011

The Second Soul of November

"Resistance" by David Noah,
Winterville, Georgia
















Athens, Georgia
November 18, 2011

       Call me Aquarius
unlike Ishmael
set to sea
by soul’s November
damp and drizzle
cold November
grim about the mouth
November
chased into the arms of Ahab
        ever striving,
        ever driving
raging to the fading light
in endless existential angst
aspiring to redeeming greatness
spurning fear and hope alike
embracing Übermensch inside

        which elevates
        contentious ways
        defines the dark
        in dismal days
        descends again
        the well of cold
        which holds the dread  
        November soul

well goodness gracious that
November, bless its existential
heart, so Sturm und Drang, so
not my drama. Mine the mellow
Southern season mixing mild
with bracing days, when
woodlands open up and welcome
winter’s heart of tan and brown.  
There’s peace in piercing shafts
of sunlight slowly warming forest
floor where solemn anoles fade
in silence, green to tan in golden
sun, a grace in shy suburban does
when flushed from front yard
flower gardens, gracile statues
snapped to life and soaring lightly
merge with early evening shadows
cast by rising Hunter’s Moon.

November’s second soul is sweetness
wrapped in dwindling light and life,
a treasure passed unrecognized
by those who set themselves
to sea

        immersed
        and haunted
        ever onward
        driven, seeking
        never finding
        ever scanning
        endless oceans
        screaming
        squid-breath
        over here, ya
        wanna’nother
        piece a’ me?

Though some still think to call
it glory – deeply woven hero
story – manning up is in our guts,
in coded genes we cannot break,
but fallen human spirit grows
new harmonies will soon take hold
November’s grace will seep inside
and ground the mind of greatness
yet.

        So never mind
        the date precisely
        when my fate shall
        breach beside me,
        when the white whale
        comes for me, I’ll draw
        upon that second soul
        to harness what I have
        in store to bless the beast
        that looms before me,
        bless the beast that lurks
        inside, to look with love
        on ice cold eyes, to look
        my last on open skies,
        to fill my lungs with light
      and dive.

1 comment:

  1. Bob,
    This is a remarkable poem -- the stanzas move through their meaning with the intent below the surface, like waves in an ocean. You capture the huge Melville-like ambivalence and shifting of perspective that (dare I can it) growing older can provide. Who doesn't have a goal, a white whale, that they chase for a lifetime? I especially like the direct address: "over here, squid-breath ..." And, of course, ultimately, life ends as it always does, with the capture of the beast we've unwittingly always sought. Congratulations, well done, and a good evocation of this melancholy month.

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